literature

What Eve must've thought

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Chewing the fig leaves
off of my breasts,
I'm content to find myself,
my shadow,
and you
in the stretching afterglow
of a flaming sword,
knowing that
being exiled from Eden
can't be all that bad.
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bubblesthedead's avatar
I like the off of. It sounds more..complete to me.